Thursday, November 3, 2011

Write a brief summary of your analysis, along with any recommendations you might have for conveying the message more persuasively.

Personally I believe that this document conveys the correct message to younger internet users, but does so in a way that is not appealing to many adolescents. Reading this, I get the feeling of a parent talking to their child, and it receives the “in one ear, out the other” reaction from many children. Having other children give testimonial, first-hand accounts of their experience with poor internet safety will reach the audience on a deeper level. It will show as opposed to telling the audience what can happen if the proper steps are taken to ensure your safety. I also think that for the parents of children under 17 years of age, a separate pamphlet should be created in order to instruct parents on proper internet safety precautions

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